Tuesday, 19 February 2013

Teacher Feeback on Contents Page


Contents page and peer feedback

 
 
Feedback 1: 
 
Oliver Wright: I like the colour scheme that you have used because it makes everything stand out. To improve, i would change the star behind the "elektric tour 2013" to a circle or a splat shape. I like that you have used columns for the contents because it groups everything together.
 
 
Feedback 2:


 
you have really thought out your contents page and you have positioned everything really well on the page, the colours you have choosen work well with each other and you gave included a variety of different images. to improve I would move the text from behind the artist's head so it is more visible.
 
Feedback 3:

Elizabeth Finlay: I like the use of collumns as it makes your contents page clearer and crisp. You have used the colour scheme especially well and it is clear from instant look that you recognise the genre of your magazine! really good! :) well done !!